
Consuming Passions
Long slender legs to her armpits;
beautiful eyes flashed her carnal intent.
He had been looking for her his whole life.
Their eyes locked,
bodies swaying together in lovers’ embrace.
A question hung between them.
He: “What do you want?”
She: “To devour you.”
And then he lost his head.

This poem was inspired by two mating praying mantises I photographed last week. Sometimes the female mantis, the smaller of the two, eats the head of the male mantis during copulation. The male is able to continue the deed without his head for a short time as apparently he has a separate mini-brain in his abdomen. Talk about being ruled by the little head! I confess that I had to look away.
Today’s NaPoWriMo challenge was to write a poem that anthropomorphises a kind of food, and ask yourself how the food feels about it.
Alrighty, gruesome.
Bon Appétit, everyone.
Kind Regards.
Tracy.
NaPoWriMo #20
For information on the copulating appetites of praying mantises, here is an article from The Guardian.
Ha ha! I love this take!!
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Strange woman. 😉
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Something I have never seen
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Count yourself lucky, Brian.
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You got me with this one! I didn’t see the praying mantis copulation coming.
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🤣 I bet the poem surprised you then, Liz.
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It certainly did! :O
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‘Off with his head’ has just taken on a whole new meaning, Tracy. I passed on the article on copulating praying mantises….
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I can understand that, Lois. I made the mistake of viewing the video included in the article. It is not for those who struggle with the circle of life.
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haha! Yes, you know I do struggle with that. Love ya, Tracy!
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Love ya too, Lois.
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Lovely poem. Wonderful photos. But while I’m eating breakfast?? Amazing Tracy! How’s your TL doing?
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Thank you, Ann. Sorry about putting you off breakfast.
My TL is settling into a new routine. He’s less woebegone. Exploratory surgery next.
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After raising three boys nothing can ruin my breakfast!! I’m glad your TL is stable, and I hope the exploratory surgery happens soon. I hope you are coping well with it all. Take care!
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Nice write. Loved the ending. Hope all is well with you and your TL.
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Thanks, Heather. All well here. We are getting into a routine. Exploratory surgery next for my TL.
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I hope that will set you on a healing path.
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Ah, excellent Tracy. Love that twist!
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Thanks, Margaret. 😁
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Funny, I thought of mantids immediately… I think there’s an object lesson in this for humans but damned if I know what it is… 😉
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Must have been the green smoothie that tipped you off, Martha. 🤣
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Ha ha ha ha!
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Now that is certainly food with benefits! 😉
How’s TL doing?
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Eek.
He’s waiting for exploratory surgery now, Punam.
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Very clever poem, Tracy!
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Thank you, Ann.
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They are brutal insects.
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And very hungry!
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Yeah, gruesome!!! Liked the surprise element in your story
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It truly was.
Thank you.
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