In honour of the National Folk Festival (Australia), which opens tonight (Thursday), I have written a little parody that I thought I would test out on you, dear Readers. I have no idea whether I will be brave enough to recite it at any of the poetry workshops. I never have before. It depends on your feedback. If you are really brave, you can try to sing along to the tune of the Sounds of Then, which was written and performed by Ganggajang (you’ll have to sing over the top of their words). I won’t be singing come performance time. I’ve provided a link to the original song below. Aussies may find this fun, but others will probably be completely flummoxed. Please note there is a certain amount of hyperbole used in this poem.
Sounds of Zen (Ode to the National Folk Festival)
I think I hear the sounds of Zen,
The music playing,
The folkies queue, got their tick-ets,
Almost there, nearly through the gate.
Lost in thought, completely chilled.
It can’t be right, someone else’s tune,
It’s fo(l)-kie / paro-dy.
In a tent, how Ma-jes-tic.
Lost in thought, completely chilled.
Bring out the mandolins,
Bring out the fiddles too.
Out on the Village Green we’d sit,
And the kebab smoke we’d breathe.
We’d watch the circus cracks, in their undies,
And laugh and think, this is the Nash-a-nal.
Some felters felting, the coffee brews.
Lights they sparkle over-head.
At the Stockmans Camp, damper and stew,
Give it up fo…..r the sound crew.
Lost in thought, completely shot,
Brings forth the vin-da-loo.
Out on the Village Green we’d sit,
And the kebab smoke we’d breathe.
We’d watch the circus cracks, in their undies,
Laugh and think that this is the Nash-a-nal.
Instrumental
It can’t be right, someone else’s tune.
It’s fo(l)-kie / paro-dy.
In a tent, how Ma-jes-tic,
Lost in thought, completely chilled.
Bring forth the mandolins,
Bring forth the fiddles too.
Out on the Village Green we’d sit,
And the kebab smoke we’d breathe.
We’d watch the circus cracks, in their undies,
And laugh and think, this is the Nash-a-nal.
Out on the Village Green we’d sit,
And the kebab smoke we’d breathe.
We’d watch the circus cracks, in their undies,
And laugh and think, this is the Nash-a-nal.
This is the Nash-a-nal.
This is the Nash-a-nal.
This is the Nash-a-nal.
This is the Nash-a-nal.
I invite you rate my parody in the comments.
1 – really shit
2 – shit
3 – good shit
4 – shit hot.
hahaha, actually you made it great! Its definitely 3!
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You are too kind. 🙂 Good to hear from you Makiko.
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Enjoy the festival and have a great long weekend and/or happy Easter. 😊
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You too, Makiko.
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Thank you Tracy! 🙂
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Yes, it made me laugh. I give it a 3 as well. Perhaps you could recite it and sing the chorus!
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Ha, everyone is being so kind. Thanks Jane. That might be too high a score for a folk festival poem. I’ll play it by ear. 🙂
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What fun…………it’s a 3 from me too 🙂
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My commenters are such a funny lot. Thank you, Brian. You are kind too. 🙂
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hahah this is fun! Yes, I agree. I’m in a channeling mood! I give it a 3 (said in my best Manu impersonation).
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🙂 Thank you.
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Real folk festival poetry Go on be brave and give it a whirl, but wait till the pot has been swirling around!!!
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We’ll see. I have written a bush poem too for a workshop tomorrow. I think it is a bit better.
I might post it in a few days. Lots of swearing in it though…. 🙂 I’m off to opening night now. Already exhausted.
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Are you camping on site and is it raining?
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No, we live not far away. But camping does look good. No rain forecast over the four days. Overnight lows of about 10c, top 29c. In other words, perfect.
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Good weather can make all the difference
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Definitely a 3! Good luck if you are performing!
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Thank you so much. I didn’t perform it. But I did a couple of other poems. I’m a bit proud of myself since I have a fear of public speaking. I was also inspired by the experts to keep writing as well. 🙂
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Congratulations on getting up there in front of a crowd! 👏👏👏 That takes a lot of courage!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Really good shit! 🙂
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Thanks Martha for the top marks. I’m glad people have taken the rating scale and the parody in the spirit it was intended. Not a masterpiece, but just a bit of fun. 🙂
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